Great idea/vision; your image is arresting–-initially.
Unfortunately (for this viewer), there is a ping pong effect where the large balloon grabs my attention; then, I want to see the other balloon but it is too small & I’m pulled right back to the main subject & so on.
To better express your vision, you might try making the small balloon larger & closer. Otherwise, I’d crop out the small balloon along with half the sky top & left–going with the abstraction.
Either way, I wish I had this image to work with. Thanks for sharing your art/work.
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