RMSP 365 Day Project: Day 55

This photograph was taken by RMSP Office Manager, Cheri Ferguson.

3 thoughts on “RMSP 365 Day Project: Day 55

lynne

love your photo. i need to do teh 365 project. i heard about it from a 16-year-old photographer in Lodi!

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Barry Grivett

Your image does capture my eye: probably the ‘line’ (of balls) leading from lower right to upper left; but, since I read from left to right I’d try flipping it horizontally–-unless you like the extra tension this way. Then, there are the curves of the laces: you might try adjusting them for an even stronger path through/around/within your image; although, what you have is good (you’ve set the bar; and, I’ll have to see if I can improve on your work). You’ve got a good eye, a good idea and a potentially excellent graphic; but, I’m feeling it could be executed even better. Furthermore, if your subject is baseballs (plural), why are two out of focus: forcing us to look at just one? What with (only) the foreground ball having different lacing, I keep moving my eyes to it, finding it is (still) out of focus; and so, returning to the middle one and asking, “Why are you showing me THIS ball?” Finally, there are some unnecessary distracting specular highlights/bright spots around the edges which do not contribute to your image. Please, please try this again; and, I will too. Thanks so much for sharing. You are an inspiration!

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Barry Grivett

You win: I tried to improve on your composition; but, was unable to do so. Bravo!

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